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This is good but just seems 'nice' to me.

I find the B&W striking, your treatment improved the focal points.

I learn by making comments! Any thoughts I have about other
people's pictures can also be used to evaluate mine but it is much
easier to be critical about someone else's pictures.

Here the eye is drawn by the guitar, which is purely an instrument and doesn't play itself.

The microphone figures in both of them but is at least interesting.