23: A tighter crop of the image at...

A tighter crop of the image at http://www.23hq.com/Alopex_Deserti/photo/4924769

littletank suggested a crop focusing on the parking sign, which is a good idea as the original image lacks a real subject of focus. This crop I think still doesn't quite draw you to a specific subject, although the steak of light from the passing car and flaring street lights draw you close to the middle where the word "Public" has an easier time grabbing attention. I also tried to dim the sign on the building in the background so it wouldn't seize as much attention. My first attempt was rather blatantly obvious so I think that's something I will want to practice.

4 comments so far...

littletank September 07, 2009, 01:43 PM

Could I suggest something else, please. I think you might improve still more if you crop away much of the bottom of the image. There is what looks like a shadow or a dark strip and I would crop it there and perhaps add a little more at the top to balance the picture. As for a focus have you thought of making the crossing sign a little lighter and trying to tone down the streak of light? Dimming is not easy and there are several ways to do it. Have a look at http://meetthegimp.org/episode-069-burn-and-dodge/ it might help.

Alopex_Deserti September 08, 2009, 05:38 AM

Hmm. I've tried a crop at the bottom around the shadow and I think you're right. That's a good place to cut. Have to try going back to the original uncropped version and try opening upwards. I'll have to review that episode as well.

littletank September 08, 2009, 06:12 AM

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