la bruja de los dedos fríos del estacionamiento

by the canyon that borderlines with the parking lot
a woman vanished once, woman lost long ago
on late nights, one perceives a whisper & a gentle stroke of glacial fingers,
a soft mourn in between layers of wind, of freeway rush,
of the beats of your heart,
now frozen from her, resting her fingers, her pains
so near to your ear, so near to your soul
cold


4 comments so far...

scenebutnotheard July 03, 2008, 04:15 PM
Bere, this is truly a wonderful description of the trees. You have a childlike ability to see the world with a sense of wonder and to convert everyday mundane items and events into priceless works of art. Thank you for letting us view life through your eyes. You have inspired me this day.
bere July 07, 2008, 09:09 PM
oh hola Kevin
muchas gracias por tu fantástico comentario!
it's been a while since i wrote these and i almost forgot about the stories on 23 :) glad you found them
and thanks for your neat words over my words...

and hey!! do you recognize the trees? these are the eucalyptus outside the CASAS office! right at the end of the parking lot... mmm, sometimes is fun to stay late working, so you can catch spooky scenes like this one!

thanks Kevin and welcome to 23hq!

scenebutnotheard July 12, 2008, 03:14 PM
I didn't recognize the trees. The story reminded me of a spanish play that I was in called La Dama Del Alba written by Alejandro Casona. The story was about a woman who was the spanish equivalent of the Grim Reaper. Every time she came to town it meant that it was time for somebody to die and go back with her. The plot twist was that she didn't always leave with the person she originally came for. Sometimes it worked out better to take someone more deserving. :-)

In case you haven't already seen it, here is a poem you may be interested in since it would have never been written had I not read one of yours. Thanks for being my muse!:
http://www.23hq.com/scenebutnotheard/story/3249951

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